Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Writing Narrative - Kayaking Trip

One beautiful sunny afternoon, a family of 5: Bree, Kai, Eve, Collin and Paige, decided that it would be a lovely day to go on a camping trip for the weekend. So… they did. At around 3:25pm they started packing all of their gear that they would need on a camping trip. They packed: Food, Water, Tents, Pillows, Sleeping Bags and everything else they needed for a camping trip. They even packed 4 kayaks. 3 single ones and 1 double.

So, at 4pm they set off to the Ahipara camping grounds. It took them around 5 hours to get there. They arrived there at around 8:45pm. Once they got there, they all jumped out of the van and set up all of their camping gear.  The put up their tent and Bree and Kai made a fire with matches and timber they had found or broken off the trees. The Ahipara camping grounds is a very beautiful place to go camping. There is a calm ocean down below the rocks and a soft sandy beach and clean toilets and showers for campers.

The Next Day, they decided to go for a hike into the forest to see if they could find some fruit or a river to go kayaking down. So, they got ready and went. About 30mins later they had found some berry bushes and mango trees. Also, right beside the fruit bushes was a lovely, calm river. It wasn’t rocky or dangerous, so that meant they could all kayak together. Furthermore, they grabbed their kayaks and put them in the water. Bree went with Eve in the double one. Everyone else went in their own kayak.

But, out of nowhere, a GHOST PIRATE pops up out of the river and scares everyone. The ghost pirate tied them up and cast a spell on the animals of the forest. A bear, birds, 2 wolves, and 4 monkeys. Ghost pirate cursed the animals and the forest animals were about to attack, but then… all of a sudden, Captain Marvel and Luke Cage fly through the forest and to their rescue.

The Ghost Pirate gets scared and goes back below the riverbed. With the animals of the forest still cursed. They attack Captain Marvel and Luke Cage, but they defeat the animals and untie the family of 5. So, they all went back to their camping spot, pack up their gear and ride back home. They promised never to return to this beautiful, but harsh land.  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Atareita,
    It’s Danna in Room 4 at Wesley Primary School. That was a good story and good narrative work all of it is narrative writing good work. But maybe you could add more to it like describe it to make it better but it is still good work. If you want to see my blog here it is this is were I show my learning in the internet.

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