tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8842192839268942059.post2031653350962085484..comments2023-03-27T01:59:46.902+13:00Comments on Atareita: Writing Narrative - Kayaking TripPES Blogs Admin 2014http://www.blogger.com/profile/15710822352595092146noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8842192839268942059.post-50256801373479910832016-11-10T12:00:30.761+13:002016-11-10T12:00:30.761+13:00Hi Atareita,
It’s Danna in Room 4 at Wesley Primar...Hi Atareita,<br />It’s Danna in Room 4 at Wesley Primary School. That was a good story and good narrative work all of it is narrative writing good work. But maybe you could add more to it like describe it to make it better but it is still good work. If you want to see my blog here it is http://wpsdannaa.blogspot.co.nz/ this is were I show my learning in the internet.<br /><br /><br />Blog You Later!Dannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04781489833590363471noreply@blogger.com