First, I Nyree's blog and I read her camp retell. Here is a link to Nyree's Blog: http://pesnyreee.blogspot.co.nz/. So, in Nyree's 1st paragraph she was talking about how excited she was to be on camp, about how windy it was outside, so they had to sleep inside and how students that weren't on camp stayed in class and worked with a reliever.
In her 2nd paragraph she talks about the camp groups, their names and why the names of our groups were called what they are. The camp groups were, Kind'a Crazy, Kind Crushers, Kindonators, Kind Crew, Kind Kings and Queens and The Kind Legends. The reason why they are similar group names is because our topic for this year is making kindness go viral.
After that she talks about the group that she was in and who the leaders were. Her group was The Kindonators and the leaders were Ajani and Samoa. She also says that her team was the best because they participated in all the games and they also tried their best at everything.
Nyree's Camp retell was similar to mine. By about 6/10. Her retell was very interesting. She is a very good writer
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