Smart Emails - Formal and Informal

This is a Presentation that I created in my school literacy class. It Is about Smart Emails and Formal or Informal. What they mean and How thy are different. Take a look. Please feel free to comment on my blog.

Writing Sample Practice and Rubric

On Monday the 7th of September we had our annual school cross country. It was a nice sunny day to do it. We had our cross country after Lunch at 1pm.  

My House Colour was Green. There were other colours too. They were, Blue, Red and Yellow. When we were waiting I felt a bit nervous because I thinking about what place I would come in. We had to hop into Boys and Girls lines from Year 1 - Year 8. Once everyone was in their Year Lines then Ms Vaafusuaga talked to us about the rules. It took forever. Moreover, when she had finished talking then the Yr 1 Boys went up to Race first. I was cheering for my brother. When the clamps went ‘CLAP’ the Yr 1 boys ran as fast as they could. My brother was in the lead. At the end I was very surprised about who had came first. Guess Who Did? MY BROTHER. YAY!!!.

As soon as the Yr 1 Boys were finished Classes 6,7,8,9 and 10 moved over by the field to check out the races. While I was waiting for our turn to race I sat down and watched the other people in the school run. It was amazing. After about 30mins, It was the Yr 5 girls turn. Which means it was my time to run. I was feeling very very nervous. Mrs Nua took us up to the starting line. After That, we and got to the starting line and I looked around me nervously. I saw my friends on the other side of me and they were looking like they were ready to race. When I heard Mr Burt go ‘CLAP’ with the clamps I run my fastest I was coming about 10th at first but then I was coming above 10th. I stopped for a bit then I ran again. I was feeling excited when I ran because I was relieved that I wasn’t coming last. Once I got onto the reserve I stopped for about 5min to catch my breathe then I ran as fast as a lion. I was really getting tired but I knew that if I had stopped then I might have came over 20th. So I carried on.

About 10 mins later I reached the finish line. Heaps of people were cheering for everyone especially Ms Vaafusuaga and Mr Burt. I felt really amazed when I pasted the finish line but I was also very tired. I went for a drink of water then sat down to watch the other races.

Furthermore, when all the races were done I went to class and packed for the next day. I wonder how I will feel next year we do cross country. I might feel heaps of different emotions. Let’s just wait and see next year. It was an amazing day for the whole school. I hope that I come in the Top 5 next year.

THE END

CV

This is my Curriculam Vitae for a enterprising job. I applied to be a Bank Teller. I hope you enjoy reading my CV. 

What Is A Fraction?

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In our maths class we have been learning about fractions. As you can see I have done different groups and different objects. I have done Dogs, Arrows, Chocolate and a Cake. I have put them into groups and some will be the same but some will be different. I hope you enjoy.

Immersion Assembly Recount

IMMERSION ASSEMBLY RECOUNT

This morning it was the 1st day of school, but of Term 3. I was so excited to finally see my friends. It had been 2 weeks ever since I saw them. I missed them so much. Since it was the 1st day of Term 3, we had an assembly and that is what I am writing about today. Enjoy.

Welcome to my boring assembly recount. Just Kidding. My amazing assembly recount. I am going to tell you all about it. First off, this morning when I arrived at the smartest school ever (Pt England School), the first thing that I did was help the tall Mr Jacobsen  with the chairs. After that I went to the shops and waited for my brilliant friend Stacey and her strong sister Mary. Then I came back to school with Stacey and Mary. Stacey was the first joyful friend of mine that I had met today. At about 8:30am the 1st bell rang. It was very loud. Trust me. Then I got to see 2 of my other awesome friends. Their names were Paige and Sheales. Finally all of my best friends had arrived at school. When I walked to class I saw a tiny, green leaf bug. It was crawling around on the hard, sore stones.

The 2nd bell rang at 8:50am, so that means that it was time for the fabulous assembly. At assembly, when I went in I saw the silly, hilarious Mr Burt auctioning toys, sweets and other cool stuff. He kept calling out “Welcome to the House of England! Where we auction really useless stuff. Just kidding. Really awesome stuff. With this stuff you would never want to share it. You would probably even become selfish with all these cool gadgets.” You would probably want to keep it all to yourself. You might even become greedy. I was so surprised.

Our Topic for this term was Trade and Enterprise. That is why he was auctioning stuff. I went to sit down in the warm hall for assembly. I was so warm. I even started to get hotter and hotter during assembly. In assembly, the whole school sat in the hall ready for Mr Burt to start. He had a lot of things to auction. Even brand new rugby balls. These were the colours: Pink, Blue, Green, Yellow, and Red. They looked so awesome. I had a number in my hands and also some money. My number was 27 and I had $10. I kept on holding my number up for the rugby balls, but I never got any. So then their was a big block of Cadbury Dairy Milk chocolate up for auction. So I put up my number and bought it for $10. After that to get my prize I had to pay the prefects my money and then I got to keep the block of chocolate. It looked Delicious. I was so excited and happy to eat it.

Moreover, In assembly there were videos. For example: Team 1 would go first. They had a video to tell us about what they will be doing or learning about in class. Every single Team from 1 - 5 had a video and explanation. My class is learning about marketing (Buying and Selling stuff me create). The fantastic school assembly took forever. I almost fell asleep. It was that long.

Once assembly finished I was so happy. After assembly the whole school went back to their classes and started to do their work. I was starting my immersion assembly recount. It was better than being in the hall for any longer.

That is the end of my Immersion assembly recount. I hope you enjoyed reading. THE END.

Minecraft Selfie

This is my Minecraft Selfie that I have Created on Paper. There is another post that I made, but It was on a site. This was a bit harder to do it on paper than to do it on a site. Why don't you give it a go. We had to use strips and cubes to paper. But the cool thing was that you could design it anyway you want. This is the one that I created online. 

Hope you enjoy. 

 

Ata Design A Playground

This is my Design a Playground Presenation. I hope you enjoy watching what I have created. Let's Take a Look.

About Albert Einstein (Inventor)

Hi this is mine and my partners presentation about Albert Einstein. We were given a task to find information about an Inventor and we picked Albert Einstein. We picked him because he was a really famous and smart Inventor. Also known as a scientist. He Created a refrigerator. But not just any refrigerator. He called it the Einstein Refrigerator. Take a Look. Did you also know that he became famous for his bad memory. Well I didn't either. If you don't believe me just take a look on the internet.