BEHIND THE DOOR - Narrative

BEHIND THE DOOR

It was a sunny day in a suburb which was named Pt England. People were playing outside and kids were at school. Except for this one little boy, Jack. Jack absolutely hated school. So, he never went. Jack just stayed home and some days he would also like to ride his bike around the neighbourhood.

But, one day, a tourist named, Amy arrived in Pt England. So, Jack went up to her and welcomed Amy to Pt England. “What has brought you to this lovely suburb may I ask?” Jack said to Amy. “Well, I’m from Tonga and I have been to a lot of different countries. Like, Samoa, Fiji, Solomon Islands, Niue and much more. I’m a tourist.” Amy replied. “I actually have a friend sitting my house while our was on vacation. I’m going there now.” She said. “Ok! Well goodbye for now and I’ll hopefully see you around the neighbourhood.” Jack replied.

Amy just realised something, “Jack? Why aren’t you at school? Are you sick or something?” Jack said, “No. I just really hate school. So, I stay home with my mum.” “Oh ok. Bye!” Amy yelled to Jack while she was walking to her house. Which was just down the street.

The Next Day

Amy decides to go for a walk down the street and notices that Jack is just around the corner. So, she walks up to him and says, “Hiya, Jack! Isn’t it a beautiful, sunny day.” Jack replies, “Yeah! It sure is.” “Hey Amy? Would you like to go for a walk around the neighbourhood with me?” “Sure! I was walking around by myself and a little company would be awesome.” So, Jack and Amy wonder around and they come to a house that has signs up all around it.

Signs say, DANGER! BEWARE OF THE HAUNTED HOUSE! GHOSTS AND CLOWNS! TURN BACK! DON’T GO IN! OR SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES! But, Amy is determined to see what is really behind the door of this mysterious abandoned house.

Furthermore, Amy enters the house and Jack is too scared to go in because of what the signs say. Jack tries to convince Amy not to go in, “Amy don’t go in! You’re going to get hurt! But, she just doesn’t listen. She goes in and realises that the door slammed shut. She starts screaming and shouting. She shouts to Jack, “Jack!! Get HELP! PLEASE?! QUICK!! Call the police or something! Just get some help!!

Jack notices that Amy has left her phone outside on the grass. He picks it up and calls the police. The police come as fast as they can and try to rescue Amy out of the Haunted Mysterious House. About 30mins later, the house just opens the door and Amy comes sprinting out. She trips and one of the police officer's dash to her and save Amy from falling into a pit of doom.

Amy gets rescued and she swears never to go into or near that Haunted Mysterious House ever again. After that, Jack and Amy take another stroll in the park and forget that nothing ever happened. They both just live their normal lives.

THE END

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Mountain Narrative

In 1937, on a Saturday afternoon, 2 newborn baby boys were finally brought to life after being in their mother’s stomach for 7 months. Their names were Taranaki and Tongariro. They were raised by their lovely parents, Ruapehu and Pihanga. They had very mean neighbours living across from their house. But then a few hours later a newborn baby girl was born. Her name was Everest. Her parents were, Logan and Eden. The minute Taranaki and Tongariro saw how beautiful Everest was, they were shocked. Everest took their breath away. If you could only she how beautiful she was.

The problem was that Taranaki and Tongariro both loved her so much. A few years later,  Everest grew up to be a beautiful young lady. Then Taranaki and Tongariro grew up as well. Taranaki grew up to be a brave, handsome and strong young man. So did Tongariro. A few hours later, Everest went over to Taranaki and Tongariro’s house to see if they could play outside. So they both came to the door and saw that Everest was standing there right in front of them. “Are you allowed to come and play outside with me” she asked. They both said, “Yeah, sure. Why not,” So they all went outside to play. But then it started to get darker and darker. Than Everest said, “Sorry guys, I had a lot of fun. But it is getting too dark, so I need to go home. We can always play tomorrow.” Then Taranaki and Tongariro said, “Sure, we need to be heading inside as well for dinner.” After that they all said, “GOODBYE. SEE YOU TOMORROW.”

10 years later… Taranaki and Tongariro started to get furious with each other. They both loved the same girl. But they didn’t know what to do about it. So they battled over Everest to win her beloved heart. Once Everest had heard about what they were going to do, she suggested that they play rugby for her and whoever gets to 5 points first will get to go out with hey, but whoever loses with get turned into a mountain. They went to the rugby field and played and played until someone had won 5 points at least. But then… They came a tie. So Taranaki and Tongariro said, “Oh no, we have come a tie. What do we do now?” Everest said, “So break the tie. Whoever scores the next goal wins!” So after a while Taranaki and scored the final winning goal and he won over Everest for her beloved heart. He was so excited.

After that, Tongariro said, “Congrats Taranaki!! You deserve a woman like Everest.” They all then went back to their house and Tongariro travelled somewhere else to get turned into a mountain. Once he had done that he would no longer be called just Tongariro. He would be called Mount Tongariro. For his sake, he now stands located in Manawatu - Wanganui. Then about 2 years later, Everest and Taranaki had a beautiful little girl. They called her Pihanga. That is my version of the story of how Mount Tongariro was formed.